Comick's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Viktor's Leap]

Its cool to see the whole flip and land! I recall you showed the very very start a while ago when he jumped up and went into ball form and half a twist then it stopped there lol. Nothing beats the look of raw pencil animation on paper...and even then the pencil renders are so well done it doesnt even really need much cleanup or even inking because you really got it down so well- imo :0 . Also his body and fur line up solidly in all that motion and I love the little flop of his back legs when he lands too. Great animation! I suppose the only crit I can give is that the double flip leaves him hanging in the air a bit longer then I think it would last but I cannot tell you exactly how id fix it. It was the only little thing that I could pick out as looking odd? But damn the whole thing was very well done! Plus extra points for it being old school paper animation, I cannot get enough of the look of raw materials in action :) good job

JFrancisFright responds:

Thank you very much! I love the raw, scratchy look of pencil animation too (I LOOOOVE the look of the "Xerox Era" Disney movies). I'm gonna be cranking out way more animation in the coming months, I've been neglecting the medium for far too long ;^.^

[San Fran]

Needs 60% more hobos, dirty pigeons and hipsters. Otherwise it's very nice! :)

fearing responds:

Haha damn how did I miss that... Thanks for your review :)

[fuzzy plant pet]

Very nice

I remember this one in the pet contest :) It was one of my favs! The idea was very unique and I recall you had the only "plant based" pet in the running. The only parts that could have been touched up are the tiny white gaps in the stems missing some green....and maybe a cooler colored background so the orange blossoms wonâEUTMt blend with the background as much. :) But the creature looks super soft and gentle. Who wouldn't want endless pears to eat?! lol great job.

Havayosunu responds:

haha thanks alottle! ^^ well yeah, I still kinda suck at coloring, but well I get better n better everytime!